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February 20
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The Sarcstic Gentleman.
I have a photographic memory, too bad I'm out of film.
I'm a knight on a dead horse, no wonder I don't get anywhere.
I want a pet tiger and name him Spot.
The home of "Oddballs" comics.
The fence is good as well as the planks being spaced out like you would expect, but the scenery behind it seems a little... empty. I don't know exactly how, but it just does to me. The fences also could have used some supports lined horizontally to have it look more like a regular fence as opposed to planks being placed in the ground.
The grass is also great, but how it looks with the girl and the fence planks doesn't look right. On her, the grass looks painted on; on the fence, not so much, but there is a good amount of green space in between the grass and the bottom of the planks, which doesn't really look right, if you ask me.
Finally, the water overlapping the rocks in a few places. Self-explanatory.
Regardless of all of that, I seriously think that this is one of your best pics, Dee. The scenery is quite lovely and everything clicks together quite well, even if it fell a wee bit short in some areas. I really admire how you shaded the character (moreso than I usually like your shading), especially from the torso up. That choker spikes are a nice detail that I found cool, to boot.
Keep on rockin' Dee.
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